Question

目前，我国实施城市化进程中，从乡村（镇）迁入城市的大多数孩子存在诸多的问题，假如你是Know，你的朋友Tony发电子邮件请教你关于如何交朋友的问题，请你给他回复一封电子邮件提几点建议，词数约90左右。

内容要点如下：1．在小区内玩耍时，你可以主动与他们交流成为新朋友，并告知家长；2．请求父母带你去图书馆或一些公共场所，既可认识更多伙伴又可参加文体活动；3．在星期天，可外出郊游等。4、…….(发挥1-2点）总之，多参加交流活动，克服困难，保持耐心。

要求：1．涵盖所有要点，意思连贯，符合逻辑。2．卷面整洁，可不得逐字翻译。

 

Answer 1

Dear Tony

There are lots of things you can do. First ,you can ride your bike in your neighborhood and try to find some kids. When you find some , you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some public places where there are lots of kids. You could try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays.You can try making friends at lunches too if you go to churches on Sunday. In conclusion, try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself .

It takes time and patience. I hope you will find a best friend soon.

Yours

Know.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求在交朋友方面给出建议。提示要点比较详细，写作时注意文章的逻辑性就可以了。

【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖所有要点，意思连贯，符合逻辑，并应用了不少的复合句，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如some public places where there are lots of kids. try to be active wherever you are等。使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。