Question

书面表达
假设你是学校Health Club的成员，最近你对你校学生进行了一项有关生活方式（our lifestyle）的调查，相关信息见下表。请根据表格内容为校广播站写一篇60词左右的英文广播稿。广播稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

交通方式	很多学生坐公共汽车上学，一些学生由家长开车送到，很少（a few）骑车或走路上学；
饮食和运动	喜欢吃汉堡，冰激淋；不喜欢吃水果和蔬菜；很少锻炼。

Hello everyone! I’m from The Health Club. I want to tell you something about our lifestyle.
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                             

Answer 1

Hello everyone! I’m from The Health Club. I want tell you something about our lifestyle. Many students go to school by bus, some students go to school in their parents’ cars. But only a few students goes to school by bike or on foot. And they like hamburgers and ice cream, but they don’t often eat fruit and vegetables. The students don’t exercise often. I think it’s bad for their health.

试题分析：本文的写作首先对写作的总体目的进行陈述I want tell you something about our lifestyle.来表达写作的目的。然后根据文章的提纲来讲述学生们的交通出行方式，如by bus，in their parents’ cars，by bike or on foot来表达相应的意思。最后对学生们的饮食习惯进行介绍并提出自己的观点。
点评：初中英语的作文特别是初一的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在“准”字上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文。在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。