Question

书面表达（满分10分）

今年八月南京举办青奥会期间小明结识了美国朋友Tony，他对小明的初中生活很好奇，请你根据表格内容，以“Xiao Ming’s School Day ”为题，向他介绍小明的一天生活。内容要求：

1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2. 必须包括表格所有相关信息，可作适当发挥；

3. 80词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计数；

4. 不得使用真实姓名和校名。

Time	Activity	Feeling	Reason
8:00a.m	Do morning exercises	Like	Help him get ready for the day
8:25a.m.-4:00p.m	Have lessons	Love	Learn a lot
4:30p.m	Play sports	Like	Make him strong and have fun
7:00p.m	Do homework	Dislike	Have too much homework

Xiao Ming’s School Day

Xiao Ming’s school day starts with the morning exercises. He likes them. He ______________________________________________________________________________

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Xiao Ming loves his school life. But I think he will love it more if he has less homework.

Answer 1

Xiao Ming’s School Day

Xiao Ming’s school day starts with the morning exercises. He likes them. He does morning exercises at 8 o’clock. He thinks they help him get ready for the day. After the exercises, he has lessons from 8:25 a.m.to 4:00 p.m.. He loves all his lessons because he can learn a lot. After school, he plays sports at 4:30. He loves sports. He thinks it is great fun and doing sports can make him strong.

He begins to do his homework at 7:00 pm. He dislikes his homework. There is always much homework to do.

Xiao Ming loves his school life, but I think he will love it more if he has less homework.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据题目中给出的表格向美国朋友Tony介绍一下小明一天的生活情况，表格中给出了详细的信息，从上午8点到下午7点，小明的具体活动，这里有他喜欢做的，也有他不喜欢做的，并且要阐述原因。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，注意语言要合乎英语的表达规范，而且表格中的信息都要包括在内，不要遗漏要点。写作时我们可以就按照表格中给出内容，按时间顺序来介绍，这样既会包含所有要点，也使短文的表达有秩序，不混乱。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应该使用一般现在时态，第三人称he来表述，因此我们要特别注意每个句子中的谓语动词的形式，都要用第三人称单数形式。同时要注意将我们平时积累的短语和连词都尽量用上，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，作者按照题目的要求，根据表格中的信息介绍了小明一天的生活情况。本文中作者是按照时间的顺序来记叙的，非常有条理。短文中作者也使用了正确的人称和时态，尤其是注意了谓语动词形式的变化，非常准确。短文中作者也使用了比较多的句型和短语，如并列句、宾语从句、状语从句、动名词以及复合结构等。文中较好的句式有He thinks they help him get ready for the day、He loves all his lessons because he can learn a lot、After school, he plays sports at 4:30. He loves sports.、He thinks it is great fun and doing sports can make him strong、Xiao Ming loves his school life, but I think he will love it more if he has less homework等。

考点：提纲类作文。