Question

【题目】假如你是劳拉(Laura)，你的好朋友蒂娜(Tina)对于将要到来的考试感到很担忧，担心不能取得好成绩。请你给她写一封信，针对她的问题，提出你的建议，并给她一些安慰和鼓励。

提示词：worried about，normal，helpful (有帮助的)，first of all，next，if，will，nervous (紧张的)，believe in oneself，best

要求：1.语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；2.70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tina，

I'm sorry to hear that _________________________________________________________

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Yours，

Laura

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tina，

I'm sorry to hear that you are worried about the coming exam.It's normal to feel nervous when there is an exam.I have the same feeling as you.Here is my advice.I hope they are helpful to you.

First of all，the exam results don't mean everything.It's good to care about the result，but if you care too much about it，you will not be able to enjoy your study.Next，if you care too nervous，you'd better do something to relax.Don't spend your time worrying about the exams all the time.

Just believe in yourself and try your best.I always believe you're the best!

Yours，

Laura

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达是一封书信，结合所给的写作要求，阐明问题、给出建议。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中了he same feeling as ，First of all，be helpful to , care about， spend ...doing..., all the time, believe in等词组的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了宾语从句、时间状语从句、条件状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。