Question

假设你将带你的外教老师在南京游玩一天，请根据下面的表格写一个游玩计划。要求文中必须包括所有要点，80词左右。

Time	Places and activities	Transport
7:00a.m.-11:00a.m.	Zijin Mountain, climbing the mountain	Taxi
11:30a.m.-12:30a.m.	A restaurant, having lunch	/
1:00p.m.-4:00p.m.	The Confucius Temple, eating local snacks, buying souvenirs(纪念品)	Bus
4:30p.m.-6:00p.m.	Xinjiekou, shopping	Underground

   We are going to have a busy day today.
                                                                                            
                                                                                    
                                                                                            
                                                                                        
                                                                                  
                                                                                 
                                                                                 

Answer 1

It will be a tiring day. But I’m sure we will have great fun in Nanjing. I will take my foreign teacher to visit Nangjing for a whole day. First we will start by taxi at 7:00a.m. Our first plan is to visit Zijin Mountain. After that we are going to climb the mountain before 11:00a.m. During 11:30a.m.-12:30a.m,we will find a restaurant to have lunch. After a short rest, we will take a bus to enjoy the Confucius Temple, and eat local snacks and buy some souvenirs there from 1:00p.m.to 4:00p.m. Then we will visit Xinjiekou during 4:30p.m.and 6:00p.m This time we will chose to go there by underground. Before we leave, we are going to go shopping. We believe that we are certain to enjoy ourselves. What an exciting day. I cannot wait.

试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所给表格内容完成这篇游记作文，我们要用准确的英语句子把内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含你和你的外教一天在不同的时间段所游览的旅游景点和主要活动，以及乘坐的交通工具等，可针对提示进行适当发挥，但不可偏多。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般将来时态，主语是第一人称。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文全面、详实地介绍了“我”的游玩计划，并包含了文中所要求的全部提示信息。其中使用的句式和短语都很准确恰当，.如: Our first plan is to visit Zijin Mountain.我们的第一步是去游览紫金山和After a short rest, we will take a bus to enjoy the Confucius Temple,短暂休息之后我们将乘坐公交车去欣赏孔子庙，以及连词和过渡语的准确运用等，如,First，After that，Then，Before we leave使文章的表达很有逻辑性,更富有条理。