分析 这是一篇图画作文.内容是用以"I believe I can"为题写一篇演讲稿,参与班长(monitor)竞选.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第一人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.描述图画;学习努力,乐于助人,爱好打篮球和弹钢琴.
2.计划和打算;
常用到的重点短语:
want to be 想成为
do well in 擅长
would like to do sth 想要做某事
such as 例如
【高分句型】
1.I have a lot of hobbies such as playing basketball,playing the guitar and dancing.
such as 例如,举出事例.
2.I believe I will guide our class in the correct direction in study and other fields.
believe后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句.
3.I'm sure①we will have a wonderful time②during the following three years.
①I'm sure后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句.
②during表示在…期间.
解答 I believe I can
Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen!
My name is Li Ming!I'm very glad to be a member of our class.I want to be monitor for these reasons.
First,I'm hard-working and helpful.I work very hard at my study and do well in all subjects.I am kind and I would like to help you anytime.Second,I am active.I have a lot of hobbies such as playing basketball,playing the piano and dancing.【高分句型】I believe I will guide our class in the correct direction in study and other fields.【高分句型】I'm sure we will have a wonderful time during the following three years.【高分句型】That's all.
Thank you!
点评 本文要求写一篇演讲稿,要按照要求,从:我的优秀品质;我的能力;我将为大家做什么三个方面进行写作.用第一人称形式,我的品质和能力用一般现在时态,我将为大家做的用一般将来时态.要根据演讲稿的特点选择恰当的词语和句型结构,增加语言的感染力.
范文开头简单的自我介绍后直接点题:我要当班长;接着由first,second 等等列出自己想当班长的原因;后面用两个一般将来时的句子说明自己将会怎样当好班长.叙述清楚,结构明晰.文中的I believe I wi11…;I'm sure we will…充分表达了作者的自信,彰显了作者个性,突出了短文主题,语言精炼,符合演讲稿的特点.
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