Question

【题目】书面表达(本题15分)根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卷指定的位置上。

失败是成功之母。在过去的初三生活中，你是否犯过错误并从中得到了宝贵的经验与教训，从而取得进步？现在请你谈谈你自己在错误中学到的东西。

内容要求如下：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。

2.至少从两个方面谈谈你的进步。

3.文章层次清晰，结构完整，语句连贯.

4.词数：80~100词。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

During the past three years, I have made many mistakes. Also, I have got great experience from them.

On the one hand, I have become better at getting on with people. At first, it was difficult for me to get along with my classmates, so I kept myself away from others. Later I found out the reasons and actively made new friends. Now, I have lots of friends. On the other hand, I have become much more confident. In the beginning, I hated going to school and doing all the homework. I acted as a bad student. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made great progress and now I do well in all the subjects.

Failure is the mother of success. I believe I can learn to be even better after my middle school life.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求以失败是成功之母为话题作文。结合学习生活实际，讲述自己过去的犯错经历要用一般过去时，从错误取得的经验教训的句子多用现在完成时。时态考点多，要注意把握。过去犯过的错要提到，从错误中取得的经验教训是重点，得详写，在错误中取得了经验教训，对将来要充满希望，这点要写到，以立意深远。