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13．根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于50词的回信．信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内．所给英文提示词语仅供选用，请不要写出你的校名和姓名．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom 上周刚过完生日．他想知道你经常和谁一起过生日，怎么过的，你收到的最喜欢的礼物是什么，以及你喜欢它的原因．请你根据他的问题回复邮件．
提示词语：cake，noodles，sing songs，make a wish，get presents
．Who do you often celebrate your birthday with？Your parents？Your friends？Or…？
．What do you usually do on your birthday？
．What is your favorite present？Why do you like it？

To       Tom
From    Li Hua
Subject  Birthday
Hi!Tom，
I'm glad that you had a nice birthday party last week．
                                                     
Yours．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It is ①such a useful book that I can learn ②not only  confidence but also patience它是如此有用的一本书我不仅能学会自信和而且还能学会有耐心．
①such…that从句：如此…以至于，that引导的结果状语从句．
②not only…but also…不仅…而且…
【高分句型二】
If so，why not try to make it colorful and meaningful？如果那样，为什么不尽力让它多彩有意义呢？
①why not do sth 为什么不做某事？
②make+sth+adj让…怎样．

解答 Hi!Tom，
I'm glad that you had a nice birthday party last week．I always look forward to my  birthday every year because it means a lot to me．And I usually spend the birthday with my close friends．
On my birthday，we are used to holding a party where we sing and dance together．（经常和谁一起过生日）In order to make every birthday unforgettable．We often bake cakes by ourselves．What's more，it is very  interesting for us to paly various games such as playing cards，playing computer games，and watching videos．（怎么过的）
The most exciting moment is receiving gifts given by my friends．My favorite present is a book about how to make progress from Lucy．（最喜欢的礼物是什么）It is such a useful book that I can learn not only  confidence but also patience．【高分句型一】It is meaningful both for my study and life．（原因）Birthday plays an important part in our daily life．If so，why not try to make it colorful and meaningful？【高分句型二】
Yours，
LiHua

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，所需主要材料已经给出，动词前需认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点然后列出一些基本词汇及词组．注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来．