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14．为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了"HEART-TO-HEART"专栏．假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信．信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响．请用英文给该同学写一封回信．内容要点如下：
表示理解并给予安慰．
提出建议并说明理由：
1）和信任的人交谈：避免伤害别人及自己；
2）参加户外活动：…；
3）…
要 求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等．
参考词汇：anger n．愤怒 temper n．脾气，情绪
Hi Worried．：
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a had time at the moment 
                                                                                                               
Yours，
Jamie．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret重要的是学会控制脾气，那样你可能不会做或者说一些你后悔的事情．
so that引导的目的状语从句．
【高分句型二】
talk to someone you trust about how you feel和你相信的人谈谈你的感受．
you trust 是省略了关系词that的定语从句，修饰someone，that做从句宾语，故可以省略．

解答 Hi Worried：
I'm  sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong，so you don't have to worry so much．The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret．【高分句型一】（表示理解并给予安慰）Here are three useful tips：
First，talk to someone you trust about how you feel．【高分句型二】This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself．Second，go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger．And third，remain optimistic about your future．Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits．（提出建议并说明理由）
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal．
Yours，
Jamie

点评 这是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求按照Worried写的求助信写一封回信，根据信中提到的困扰表示理解和安慰，并提出建议并给出理由．所以考生在写作的时候，要围绕来信的问题一一给与解答．但是光翻译要点肯定不行，还要求考生自己拓展发挥，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次．也要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，同时在列举建议和理由的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second，Besides，What's more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅．