Question

书面表达。
每个人都有自己的梦想，在你的班级小组里，李明想成为一名老师，王林想成为一名工程师，李东想成为一名医生，你的梦想是什么呢？
注意：1. 文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
2. 词数：70词左右。标题和开头已给出，不计入词数。

Our dreams	1	Everyone has his own dream.
	2	Li  Ming is going to… Wang  Lin… Li  Dong…
	3	1 want to be… We will study hard for…

 
Our dreams
Everyone has his own dream.                                            ___       
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                    

Answer 1

Everyone has his own dream .There are four students in our group . They are Li Ming, Wang Lin, Li Dong and I .We are talking about our future .Li Ming is going to be a teacher when he grows up .Wang Lin is going to be an engineer .He wants to fix computers and fridges for us .Li Dong is going to be a doctor .He will help the sick people .And I want to be a policeman in the future .We will study hard for our dreams.

解析试题分析：本文的写作不难，首先介绍我们小组有四个同学There are four students in our group分别讨论了自己的未来talk about our future，然后分别介绍四个同学的梦想be a teacher，be an engineer，be a doctor，be a policeman这样一气呵成，再用一句话进行扩展，说明成为心目中的人物后会做什么，最后表明我们都会为我们的梦想奋斗的We will study hard for our dreams.
考点：提纲类写作
点评：本文难度不大，写作条理性要把握好，对于初一的作文，不要求有很华美的词语，重在培养自己连词成句的能力，避免中式英文。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。