Question

书面表达(满分15分）

在你成长的过程中， 你认识了许许多多的人。请以“A person I will never forget”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求如下：

1. 短文内容必须包括：General appearance(外貌)

Hobby

Personality(性格)

The reasons that you will never forget him/her

2. 短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

3. 词数80左右。文章开头已给出(开头的句子不计入总词数)。

A person I will never forget

The person I’ll never forget is

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A person I will never forget

The person I’ll never forget is my English teacher. He is a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us.

He is humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.

I was not good at English at the beginning. He often helps me and is patient enough to explain the difficulties to me. With his help, my English has been greatly improved.

My English teacher is the best teacher that I have ever met. I will never forget him.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用所给要求来完成文章，所以在写作时，要尤其要谢谢胡所要求的内容。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，开头结尾相呼应。开头指出我永远忘不了的那个人是英语老师，接下来写他的外貌，爱好，性格以及忘不了他的原因。此处用了宾语从句pretend that we know what we don’t know. 和主语从句it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.以及is strict with us. allows us to pretend这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。最后在说 永远忘不了他的原因与文章开头相呼应。

考点：提纲作文。