Question

根据汉语提示，完成短文，不少于80字。 要求：书写工整，语句通顺，有逻辑性。
上周六我们在李老师的帮助下一起乘火车去了首都北京，这是我们第一次去北京旅游的介绍。

Many places of interest	Tian’anmen Square Summer Palace Palace Museum The Great Wall
Activities	take photos eat delicious food buy some souvenir 4.  ---------------------
feelings	Learn a lot hope to visit again --------------

 
                                                                      　
                                                                        
                                                                        

Answer 1

Last Saturday, we went to the capital of China---Beijing, with the help of Mr Li. We  went there by train. It is the first time for us to be there, so we were very excited.
There are a lot of places of interest and we visited many wonderful places, such as Tian’anmen Square, Palace Museum, the Great Wall and so on. Then we walked around the big lake and felt the beauty of the old park in the Summer Palace. We took some photos and ate lots of tasty food.. We also bought some souvenirs for our friends.
We all had a good time and learned a lot from the trip. All of us hope to visit there again one day.

这不仅是一篇给材料作文而且给出了文中重点信息的英文，所以本篇作文难度并不大。只要选用合适的词语把给出的句子连接好就能拿分。恰当的使用短语会给文章增光添彩，如“在李老师的帮助下”表达为“with the help of mr li”，会增加得分点。长句的使用会让文章更出彩，本文的activities就可以用and连接成表先后关系的长句。本篇是一篇简单的记叙文，按照其先后顺序把句子所缺的主谓宾补起来就ok了