Question

书面表达;(15分 ) （同学们要注意卷面的整洁）

请根据以下要点，写一篇不少于80个词的短文，不必逐句翻译，可适当发挥，

要点：2002年3月8日，中国银行附近发生了一起抢劫案。一名高个、留着棕-色长发的歹徒抢劫了一名刚从银行取出钱的妇女。该歹徒骑着摩托车，蒙面，手中持枪。三分钟内，警察赶到，与试图携款逃跑的歹徒激战。半小时后，歹徒被击毙在街道拐弯处。被抢妇女非常感激警察。请大家外出时一定要多加小心。

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Answer 1

A robbery happened near the Bank of China on March 8th, 2002. A woman was robbed of her money by a tall robber with long brown hair after she took money out of the bank. The robber was riding a motorbike, wearing a mask and carrying a gun in hand. In three minutes, the policeman arrived at the spot and fought with the robber who tried to run away with the money. After half an hour's fight, the robber was shot to death at the turning of the street. The woman was very grateful to the police. Please be careful while going out.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，注意时态语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文主要介绍了一则关于抢劫的新闻，要求作者把人物，时间，地点及事情发生的经过讲述清楚。这些句型的运用，如A woman was robbed of her money by a tall robber with long brown hair after she took money out of the bank ；the policeman arrived at the spot and fought with the robber who tried to run away with the money给文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.