Question

根据下面的提示写一篇70字左右的作文

1. 昨晚，Simon做了一个梦

2. 在梦中他追赶一只兔子来到一扇门前。

3. 兔子轻松穿过这道门，Simon个子太大无法进入

4. 他喝下门旁边的一瓶水，瓶子上面有一个标签“请喝我”。

5. 喝水之后，他变得越来越小。

6. 他穿过这道门进入一个美丽的花园，在那儿玩的很开心

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                         

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Last night Simon had a dream. In his dream, he ran after the rabbit and came to a door. The rabbit walked through the door easily but Simon was too tall to go though it.

Then he saw a bottle of water near the door. He drank the bottle of water with notes “Drink me”. After he drank it, he became smaller and smaller . then he walked through the door and went into a beautiful garden.

There he had a good time.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，所给材料比较详细，结合材料内容，可知是写一篇关于一个梦的记述文。由于是记述过去发生的事情，故主要用一般过去时态，人称主要是单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。记述文一般按照时间或者是清风发展的顺序进行写作，写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。日常学习中，注意多背诵范文，熟记一些经典句型，考试时就能有所参照，有的放矢。