Question

上个星期天5月11号是母亲节，某英语网站举办了以“My mother”为题的英语征文活动，学会感恩，学会回报。请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的母亲和你们的真情故事。

提示：1、短文应包括导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；

2、短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

3、词数不少于90字，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给话题作文。要求介绍发生在自己和母亲身上的故事，要体现感恩和回报。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称和第三人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如：定语从句The person I love most is my mother. “我最爱的人是我的妈妈。” 不定式的使用I will do what I can to make my mother happy. “我会做我能做的一切来使她开心。”等等。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，学会学以致用。使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。