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【题目】母爱情深，父爱无价，师恩无限，友情可贵。在生活中，有许多值得感恩的人，请以Love for ( ) 为题，写一篇短文。
要求：1）请将题目补充完整。
2）用80-120词写一篇完整的短文。描述你所感恩的人；感恩的原因并列举感恩的事例；你将为他/她做些什么来表达你的感激之情。
提示：1）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2）短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名及其他相关真实信息。
3）凡照抄本试卷里的文章段落，一律不得分。
Love for ( )
We need love, we also need to love others.

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Love for my mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person who I love most is my mother. My mother is 38 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. She is kind and friendly. She is a worker in a shop. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study even though she didn't have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons on the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me. Mom is the busiest person in my family but she is always happy to do everything for us. Mum, I love you!

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I'll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That's what she wants most, I think.

【解析】本题要求以Love for___ 为题目写一篇作文，体会与亲人等的爱，学会感恩，学会回报。写作要点：短文中要对感恩对象进行一个介绍，写她为你做的事情，表达你对她的情感，把你要对她说的话告诉她。文中通过记叙她为你做的事情，把你对这些事情的感受，把你对她的感激之情表达出来。写作时应主要使用第三人称，一般现在时态。如果举例的话，用一般过去时。本文第一段首先点明主题：我最爱的人是我的母亲，然后对母亲作了一个简单明了的介绍；第二段通过生活中的点点滴滴写出妈妈为家人所做的一切，被爱的理由充分，符合题意要求，本段以I love you结尾，主旨鲜明。第三段写如何感恩与回报。短文层次清晰，重点突出，表达流畅，语句连贯通顺。