Question

【题目】我区正在全力创建全国文明城区。假如你是李华，上周日参加了学校组织的志愿活动。请你用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈你们去了哪里，你做了什么，以及你的感受。

提示词语：Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, tired，proud

提示问题：● Where did you go?

● What did you do?

● How did you feel?

Last Sunday

Answer 1

【答案】Last Sunday I participated in “build a civilized city”activitity in Muhu Park. It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus,we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public. I think we should put up posters to tell people how to behave well to build a civilized city. If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.Though we are tired,we had a good time.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍周日参加的学校组织的志愿活动。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，尽量将提示的内容利用上；以提示的问题作为写作的主线，重点从三个方面去写作：1.你去了什么地方？2.你在活动中做了什么？3.你感觉怎么样？结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，运用一般过去时态进行叙述。在谈到自己感受的时候用一般现在时态。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。