Question

15．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100词．
我们即将迎来轻松又丰富多彩的假期生活，同学们一定会安排各种活动，比如宅家、聚会、外出旅行等．请你根据如下提示，写一常英文短文，发布在班级 QQ群中，提醒同子们注意安全．可以适当发挥．
内容提示：

Activities	Suggestions
stay at home	keep away from fire
have a party	come back home by 10 o'clock
go out	follow the traffic rules
…	…

参考词汇：Safety must come first（安全第一）．
注：开头已给出，不计入总词数．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名．
In our daily life，there's always something unexpected．So we must pay more attention to our safety in our coming vacation．When we stay at home，we are supposed to stay away from fire，and make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave．If we have a party，it's safe to come back home by 10 o'clock at night．And we had better not make friends with strangers when we go out for a trip．We must be careful when we take photos and climb the mountains
We should follow the traffic rules when walking across the road．Besides，remember it's dangerous to swim alone in the river
All in all，safety must come first!Have a happy and safe vacation!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是在班级QQ群中发布提示，提醒大家注意假期间的安全．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1宅家：远离火
2聚会：10点前回家
3外出旅行：遵守交通规则
常用到的重点短语：
pay attention to 关注
be supposed to do sth 应该做某事
stay away from 远离
had better do sth 最好做某事
all in all 总之
【高分句型】
1．①When we stay at home，we ②are supposed to stay away from fire，and ③make sure ④doors and windows are shut ⑤before we leave．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②be supposed to do sth 应该做某事
③make sure 确定
④省略了引导词that的宾语从句，作为make sure的宾语．
⑤before引导的时间状语从句．

2．We should follow the traffic rules when walking across the road．
when walking across the road是省略句，完整表达是when we walk across the road．

3．①Besides，remember②it's dangerous to swim alone in the river．
①besides 另外
②省略了引导词that的宾语从句，作为remember的宾语．it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．

解答 In our daily life，there's always something unexpected．So we must pay more attention to our safety in our coming vacation．When we stay at home，we are supposed to stay away from fire，and make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave．【高分句型】（宅家：远离火，离开关门窗）If we have a party，it's safe to come back home by 10 o'clock at night．（聚会：10点前回家）And we had better not make friends with strangers when we go out for a trip．We must be careful when we take photos and climb the mountains．We should follow the traffic rules when walking across the road．【高分句型】Besides，remember it's dangerous to swim alone in the river【高分句型】（外出旅行，不和陌生人交朋友，遵守交通规则，不独自在河里游泳等）
All in all，safety must come first!Have a happy and safe vacation!（总结）

点评 本题是一篇提纲作文，要求在班级QQ群中发布提示，提醒大家注意假期间的安全，要求从"呆在家、参加晚会、外出"等方面告诫大家注意相关的安全事项．短文主要用一般将来时态，可以用if引出的条件状语从句来假设不同的情况下的安全注意事项．可以用第一人称或用些祈使句来进行表达．短文第一段开篇点题：我们要多注意假期安全；第二段从几个不同的方面说明分别要注意哪些安全问题．用when，if，we must，we should，besides等等开头，分别表述了不同方面的安全．层次清楚，要点分明，让人一目了然．其中的be supposed to，had better等短语，不定式作主语的句型、分词短语作状语的表达方式等等都为本文增色不少．第三段画龙点睛：安全必须放在首位．并祝大家假期快乐、安全．首尾呼应，主旨鲜明．