Question

【题目】2016年贺州市被评为"世界长寿市"，作为"世界长寿市"的中学生，请根据下面的提示，以Good Ways to Keep Healthy为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，倡议"健康生活"，从饮食、运动及心情三个方面说明如何保持健康。短文首句已经给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
提示词：
1).Healthy diet: vegetables, fruit...
2).Do exercise: take a walk, play basketball...
3).Keep happy: make friends…
要求：文章必须包括所给提示的内容，可展开思路，自由地适当发挥。
文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息。
Good Ways to Keep Healthy

Answer 1

【答案】Good Ways to Keep Healthy

It's very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?

First, we need to have a healthy diet. We can eat vegetables and fresh fruit every day, but we'd better eat less meat. Different kinds of foods are necessary, it's important to have a healthy diet.Second, doing exercise can make us healthy and strong. We can take a walk after dinner. After school, we can play basketball or soccer with our friends. Finally, happiness is another way to keep healthy. We should try to make friends, it's a good way to keep us happy.

If we often smile, we also feel happy.

【解析】本文是一篇提纲类的应用文，要求以Good Ways to Keep Healthy为题写一篇短文，主要内容以给出，包括Healthy diet，.Do exercise和Keep happy三个方面。在写作时，主要使用一般现在时，用第一人称表达。根据内容建议分三段写作，第一段总的说一下保持健康很重要，第二段写保持健康的三个方面。第三段自己扩展一下还有什么方式可以保持健康。连接词可以用First,second,Finally等。除此之外，还可以使用一些高级词汇使文章表达更丰满。（如had better do等）