Question

亲爱的同学，初中生活很快就要结束了。回顾三年的生活，你一定有很多收获吧。假如你叫李明，你的美国笔友Mike对中国学生的生活非常感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，写一封信谈一谈你自己在初中三年里的美好回忆与收获。

1.学校生活（喜欢的老师，喜欢的学科，取得的进步等）

2.课外生活（兴趣，爱好，交友等）

3.……

注意：1.字数80—100；2.请结合实际增加细节，适当发挥；3.不能出现真实的校名、姓名或透露与个人身份相关的其他信息；4.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike，

Thanks for your last letter.I'm very happy to tell you something about my middle school life.

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What  about you？Can you write to tell me  something about your school life?                                                                                                                         

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

　　Thanks for your last letter.I'm very happy to tell you something about my middle school life.

　　In study, I am good at Chinese and English, while math is my weakness.  Mr. Li is my math teacher.He often helped me with my studies very patiently. With his help, I made great progress in math and caught up with my classmates. He was always very kind to every student. As an experienced teacher, he was respected and loved by all his students.

　　I have many interests. Swimming, reading and movie are my favorites, which bring color to my busy study life. Besides, I am easygoing and likely to make friends with others. Friendship is an important part of my life.This is my middle school life.What  about you？Can you write to tell me  something about your school life?

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，写一写自己初中三年的回忆与收获。由于在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题，根据要求可知本句主要是一般现在及过去时态，人称是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。