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长汀县因在推进城乡绿化、治理水土流失方面取得了显著成绩，荣获“全国生态文明建设和现代林业建设示范县”称号。但我们还仍需发扬“滴水穿石、人一我十”的精神，努力实现“百姓富”与“生态美”的有机统一。学校为此开展了以“How to Protect Our Environment”为主题的演讲比赛。

内容要求：

1.列举2-3个有关破坏环境的现象。

2. 提出至少两点保护环境的建议。

词数80左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词（可选用）：

destroy, plastic, blue, dirty, fish, ride, throw, pour, waste, recycle

How to Protect Our Environment

Changting is becoming more and more beautiful.The environment is becoming better , but

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How to Protect Our Environment

Changting is becoming more and more beautiful.The environment is becoming better , but there are still some people destroying it. The sky is not so blue . There is no fish in some dirty rivers . Even worse, a lot of people can’t drink clean water. It’s time for us to do something to protect the environment. As a student, we should ride a bike or walk to school every day. We had better take a cloth bag instead of using plastic bags when we go shopping.We ought to stop factories pouring waste water into rivers. And we can recycle cans and bottles. If everyone does their best to protect the environment, it will get cleaner and tidier soon.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让小作者写出就“怎样保护我们的环境”自己的观点。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。小作者写的这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如It’s time for us to do something to protect the environment. We had better take a cloth bag instead of using plastic bags when we go shopping.We ought to stop factories pouring waste water into rivers.有一些好的固定短语还有连词。

考点：考查命题类作文。