Question

4．暑假即将来临．你班同学们正在讨论假期计划，提出了不同的看法．有的想和家人外出旅游，有的想和同学一起打球．你有什么看法呢？请你根据你自己的实际情况谈谈你的打算和想法．
提示词语：the summer holiday，come，your classmates，talk about，travel，play，think，do
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Though it's good for health，it's not my favourite．
句中"Though it's good for health"为"though"引导的让步状语从句；句中短语有"be good for…对…有好处"．这句话意为：尽管那对健康有好处，但不是我的最爱．
高分句型二：
In this way I can not only increase my knowledge but also do something for my parents．
句中涉及的短语有："in this way 以这种方式"、"not only…but also…不但…而且…"．这句话意为：以这种方式，我不仅可以提高我的成绩，还可以为我父母做点儿事．

解答 The summer holiday is coming．Our classmates are talking about what to do during the holiday．（开篇点题）
Some are going out for travelling with their families．Of course they will spend more money．Some are going to play ball games with their classmates．Though it's good for health，it's not my favourite．【高分句型一】（同学的计划）
I think it's much better to stay at home．I can do many things as I like，such as reading，watching TV and helping my parents with the housework．In this way I can not only increase my knowledge but also do something for my parents．【高分句型二】（我的想法）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．