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12．假设你是张丽，是家住四川芦山地震灾区林娜的笔友．她给你发来了一封电子邮件，请看后给她回复，针对她的问题给她一些建议，并谈谈你的想法．

Dear Zhang Li， I have been so sad these days．As you know，an earthquake happened in my hometown and both my parents died．Though the government gives us much help，my little sister and I cried every night because of missing，and I don't want to learn anything．I find it hard to talk with the people around．Life is dark for me without parents'love! What should I do？I really need your help． Yours， Lin Na

Dear Lin Na， I'm so sorry to hear the sad news． I understand you．.Everyone need parents'love．But when they leave the world，we must learn to take care of ourselves and face the difficulties bravely． So please stop crying and try your best to study harder to get a better future．Besides，you should take good care of your sister and help her live a happy life．What's more，it's useful to talk about your problems with the people around you．And my parents and I can also help you． I think it's important for you to be strong and brave．I believe you will be better soon． I hope what I said can help you． Yours， Zhang Li

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分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是给家住四川芦山地震灾区林娜回信，针对她的问题给她一些建议，并谈谈你的想法，注意信件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、二人称．
琳娜的来信大意是：父母在地震中身亡，虽然父母给力大力支持，但是我和我的妹妹因为想念父母，每晚都哭泣，我也不想学习，我发现很难和身边的人交流，没有父母的生活是黑暗的，我该怎么办？
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．学会照顾自己，勇敢面对；
2．努力学习，照顾妹妹；和身边的人交流
3．坚强勇敢很重要
常用到的重点短语：
take care of 照顾
stop doing sth 停止做某事
try one's best to do sth 尽力做某事
what's more 再者
【高分句型】
1．But ①when they leave the world，we must learn to②take care of ourselves and face the difficulties bravely．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②take care of 照顾
2．So please①stop crying and ②try your best to study harder③to get a better future．
①stop doing sth 停止做某事
②try one's best to do sth 尽力做某事
③动词不定式做目的状语．
3．I think ①②it's important for you to be strong and brave．
①think后省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 Dear Lin Na，
I'm so sorry to hear the sad news．
I understand you．Everyone need parents'love．But when they leave the world，we must learn to take care of ourselves and face the difficulties bravely．【高分句型】（学会照顾自己，勇敢面对）
So please stop crying and try your best to study harder to get a better future．【高分句型】Besides，you should take good care of your sister and help her live a happy life．What's more，it's useful to talk about your problems with the people around you．And my parents and I can also help you．（努力学习，照顾妹妹，和身边的人交流）
I think it's important for you to be strong and brave．【高分句型】（坚强勇敢很重要）I believe you will be better soon．
I hope what I said can help you．
Yours，
Zhang Li

点评 本本文难度不大，一般都有话可说，写作过程中写作条理性要把握好，对于自己所提出的建议，写的过程中通过变换句式和用词上来提高语言的美度．在一件事情写完后要用上表关系的连接词，或平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来是文章富于活力．在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患．