Question

根据下面提示，以“Believe in Yourself and You Will Succeed”为题写一篇短文，词数： 100左右。
提示：
1. 学习中遇到的困难；
2. 如何克服困难的；
3. 从中学到了什么。
Believe in Yourself and You Will Succeed
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　
                                                                                 
                                                                                          

Answer 1

Everyone will face some difficulties in his or her life or study. What should we do when we are in trouble? I think the most important is that we should believe in ourselves. I still remember that when I began learning English, I found it difficult to learn it well. The words were difficult to remember, and the grammars were not easy to understand. Besides, the worst thing was that I was afraid of speaking English aloud, especially in public. I was always afraid of making mistakes. The result is that I couldn’t learn English well. Then, my teacher and friends encouraged me and told me that I must believe in myself and needn’t be afraid of making mistakes.  So, I tried my best to learn English, especially practice speaking English. I still make some mistakes now but I don’t think it is a big problem. Now, my English is being improved day by day. From this experience I know that if we believe in ourselves, we will succeed.

试题分析：这是篇命题作文，题目给出了写作的标题以及内容提示，写作中要紧扣提示，注意要点的完整性。在对事件进行描述时，注意时态的准确使用和主谓一致。可适当的使用一些连词来增加文章的逻辑性。另外可适当使用一些复合句，如学过的定语从句，宾语从句等。
【亮点说明】这篇作文结构完整，表述准确流利。文中出现了一些复合句，使表述更紧凑，如：I still remember that when I began learning English, I found it difficult to learn it well.我仍然记得当我刚开始学英语时，我发现很难学好。That引导了宾语从句。Besides, the worst thing was that I was afraid of speaking English aloud, especially in public.另外，最糟糕的事情是害怕大声说英语，尤其是在公共场合。句中that引导了表语从句。另外，文中使用了一些连词，如and， besides, so 等等。