Question

【题目】书面表达。(共计15分)

假如你是张军，上周六晚上你和朋友们在你们镇新开的一家饭店聚会了。这家饭店各方面(服务、饭菜、价格、环境)都很不错，你们也玩得很开心。请你用英语写一封电子邮件把这件开心的事情和你的美国朋友艾丽丝(Alice)分享一下。70词左右，可适当发挥。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Alice，

There's a new restaurant in our town.Last Saturday evening，I had a party there with my friends.I think it's the best restaurant here.It has the best service and the most delicious food.The price of the food isn't very high.It also has the best music to listen to when you eat.All of us felt relaxed there.

At the party，we played games and told jokes.We also sang and danced.Everyone had a wonderful time.

Yours，

Zhang_Jun

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达是一封书信，结合本题所给的写作信息，跟朋友分享上周六晚上的一次饭店聚会。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般过去时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中了Last Saturday evening，The price of , listen to，All of us, At the party, told jokes, had a wonderful time等词组恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中恰当地使用了形容词最高级形式，还使用了宾语从句、连词and，使文章增色不少，值得学习。