Question

【题目】书面表达。

根据提示，以“Liu Tao’s lifestyle”为题，写一篇词数不少于70词的短文。

提示：1. 刘涛今年12岁，和爷爷奶奶一起住在如皋。

2. 经常吃汉堡、鸡肉和巧克力，但很少吃蔬菜和水果。

3. 每两顿饭之间还吃零食，很少运动。

4. 他需要改变他的生活方式。

5. 打算每天跑步20分钟，每周游泳3次，多吃蔬菜，多喝水，因为水是最好的饮料。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Liu Tao’s lifestyle

Liu Tao is 12 years old.He lives with his grandparents in Lugao He is a top student in our class, but he is not healthy. He often eats hamburgers, chicken and ice cream. He seldom eats vegetables and fruit. He also eats sweet food between meals. He doesn't like sports. He feels that it's time for him to change his diet and lifestyle. He plans to run for 20 minutes every day and go swimming three times a week. He wants to eat more vegetables and drink much water, because water is the best drink. It has no calories.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍刘涛的生活方式。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He is ......， He often eats......；及He wants to......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了汤姆不健康的生活方式，接下来介绍具体的饮食和锻炼情况，最后介绍他要改变生活方式：做运动，多吃蔬菜，多喝水。此处用了 between meals，it's time for him to，plans to，every day 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。