Question

12．根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内． 请不要写出你的姓名和学校．
假设你叫杨洋．是加拿大中学生Paula的笔友，下面是你收到的她的电子邮件．请你根据她来信的内容写一封回信．针对她的问题，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些帮助她解决问题的建议．Dear Yang Yang，
I'm having troubles these days．It's difficult for me to get down to work，I can't concentrate on studying．At home I spend most of my time playing computer games instead of doing my homework．I go to bed very late，so I feel very tired in class．Sometimes I want to listen to the teachers but I can't stop thinking about the games I played at home．As a result，I can hardly understand the teacher now．I'm afraid I can't pass the final exam．What should I do？Can you help me with the problem？
Yours，
                                                 Paula

   

Dear Paula，
    I'm sorry to hear you are in trouble now．          I believe if you work hard you'll make some progress．Good luck!
                                                         Yours，
                                                          Yang yang．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As a student，it's important for you to study hard to get more knowledge．
句中所用句型为：It is+形容词+for sb to do sth，其中"it"为形式主语，代指"to study hard"．这句话意为：作为一名学生，努力学习来获得更多的知识是非常重要的．
高分句型二：
I'm sure you'll make great progress and pass the final exam．
句中"you'll make great progress and pass the final exam"为从句，其中涉及到的短语有"make great progress 取得很大进步"．这句话意为：我相信你能取得很大进步并通过考试的．

解答 Dear Paula，
I'm sorry to hear you are in trouble now．I can understand your feeling．But I don't think it is right for you to do things like that．Don't worry．Here are some suggestions for you．（开篇点题）
As a student，it's important for you to study hard to get more knowledge．【高分句型一】So I think doing homework is necessary and useful．You should do your homework first．If it is not too late，you can play computer games for a while．Remember to go to bed as early as possible，then you won't feel tired the next day．
In class，you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes．What's more，it's important to take part in class activities，try to answer at least two questions each class．If you have any problems，ask your teachers or classmates for help．I'm sure you'll make great progress and pass the final exam．【高分句型二】（提出建议）
Good luck!（表达祝福）          Yours，Yang yang

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．