Question

假如你是新华中学一名初三毕业生。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对初三生活的看法。
(1)对获得的帮助表示感谢；
(2)对将来生活的规划；
(3)对学弟、学妹的建议。
注意：1．词数90左右；
2．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．短文须包括所有内容要点；可适当发挥，使其通顺、连贯；
4．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Junior school is regarded as a best time in a person's life. As a junior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate.___________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version：
Junior school is regarded as a best time in a person’s life. As a junior 3 student, it won’t take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, including teachers, parents and friends. Without their help and advice, my life would be different.
Secondly, I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study at senior school, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Meanwhile exercise and recreational activities are also needed. Life without sunshine and laughter is sure to be a failure.
Finally I hope that all the younger fellows always keep your dream in mind so that you will be highly motivated all the time. Even if sometimes you are in trouble, tell yourself tomorrow holds the miracle. Just one more day may be all it will take to realize your dream.

试题分析：本篇书面表达应包括三方面内容：(1)对获得的帮助表示感谢；(2)对将来生活的规划；(3)对学弟、学妹的建议。写作中应注意文章的层次脉络以及时态。准确运用一般过去时、一般将来时和一般现在时等。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，准确运用时态。文章层次清楚，衔接连贯，运用firstly, secondly, finally，meanwhile等衔接词。本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:make up one’s mind, make every effort, key to success等。同时，文章还用了被动语态。