Question

2．假如你是Li Ping，请根据下面的表格中提供的信息，给你的新朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，介绍你的业余爱好（flying and collecting kites）．
注意：表达必须体现所提供的全部细节信息，并可在此基础上适当发挥：字数为80个词左右．

Hobbies	Items	Details
Flying kites	Beginning time	ten years ago
	Flying place	park
Collecting kites	Beginning time	five years ago
	The amount	nearly 50
	Sizes	big，small
	Shapes	animals
	Storing place	my own bedroom，my parents'bedroom

（Answers vary）

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文，所给材料比较详细，且都用英语给出，故只需要将这些材料按照一定的逻辑顺序组织成文即可．在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性．结合材料可知本文主要是一般现在时态，单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系．
高分句型：
①I will try to collect more kites．我会尝试收集更多的风筝．句子中try to do sth尝试做某事．
②I hope that everyone has his own hobby and enjoys it like me．我希望每个人都有自己的爱好，像我一样享受它．句子中that引导一个宾语从句，like me像我一样．

解答 Dear Jack，（称呼语）
  Hobbies can bring us pleasure，friendship and knowledge．（引出话题）My hobby is flying and collecting kites．I began to fly kites ten years ago．I often fly kites in the parks．I think that I can do better in it than any other student in my class．Flying kites makes me happy．I am happier when they fly far away．I've been collecting them since five years ago，and I have nearly 50 kites now．Their sizes are big or small．And their shapes are animals．I will try to collect more kites（高分句型）．I store my kites in my own bedroom and my parents'bedroom．（介绍我的两个爱好）
I hope that everyone has his own hobby and enjoys it like me（高分句型）．What's your hobby？Write to tell me soon．（我的祝愿）
                                                                                                                                Yours 
                                                                                                                                    Liping（结束语）

点评 考生在写作时需明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，考生在平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．