Question

暑假就要来了，你打算怎样度过你的假期呢？请你根据自己的实际情况谈谈自己的计划。
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Answer 1

A plan for the coming summer vacation
The summer vacation is coming. During the vacation, I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will get better results when I feel relaxed. Also, I plan to read some books because reading books is interesting and I can get much knowledge from books as well. I will spend as much time as possible helping my parents do some housework. I will take part in some social activities so that I can know the society better. If possible, I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit.
I’m sure I will have a pleasant summer vacation.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。注意时态，人称，和固定词组搭配，同时将题目所给的材料要用上。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如I will get better results when I feel relaxed.， Also，as much time as possible，take part in，If possible，等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。