Question

4．It seems that we have homework every day．Why should we students do homework？What are the advantages of doing homework？Why does too much homework sometimes annoy you？Write a passage according to the chart below？

pros	cons
review what we have learned in class	much homework needs lots of time and energy
see if we have understood everything the teacher has taught	have no time for our hobbies and activities
…	…
…	…

注意：
1．所写内容必须包含表格内容．
2．需另写出各两个优缺点．
3．词数：80个左右．
We students can benefit from homework in many ways．To begin with，we have to review what we have learned in class in order to do our homework．This gives us the chance to see if we have understood everything the teacher has taught and practice what we have to work on our own when we do our homework at home and not depend on teachers and classmates for help．It can help us learn to keep a balance between hobbies and schoolwork
However，there are also disadvantages to do too much homework．Firstly，too much homework needs a lot of time and energy，so we students have no time for our favorite hobbies and activities．What is worse，many students complain that homework is boring because they have to do the same things again and again．what's worse，it may lead some students to give up studing．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是谈谈家庭作业的利与弊．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称和第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1有利之处：复习课上学过的内容；看看是否已经掌握老师所教的内容
2不利之处：太多的作用需要太多的时间和精力；没时间去做自己喜欢的和运动
3需另写出各两个优缺点
常用到的重点短语：
benefit from  从…获益
on one's own 独自的
depend on 依赖
what's worse 更糟的是
【高分句型】
1．①To begin with，we have to review②what we have learned in class ③in order to do our homework．
①to begin with 首先
②what引导的宾语从句，作为review的宾语．
③in order to 表目的，做目的状语．
2．This gives us the chance ①to see②if we have understood everything ③the teacher has taught and practice ④what we have to work on our own⑤when we do our homework at home and not depend on teachers and classmates for help．
①动词不定式做后置定语，修饰chance．
②if引导的宾语从句，作为see的宾语．
③the teacher has taught定语从句，修饰先行词everything，关系词that做宾语，故省略．
④what引导的宾语从句，作为practice的宾语．
⑤when引导的时间状语从句．
3．①What is worse，many students complain②that homework is boring ③because they have to do the same things again and again
①what's worse 更糟的是
②that引导的宾语从句，作为complain的宾语．
③because引导的原因状语从句．

解答 We students can benefit from homework in many ways．To begin with，we have to review what we have learned in class in order to do our homework．【高分句型】（复习课上学过的内容）This gives us the chance to see if we have understood everything the teacher has taught（是否已经掌握老师所教的内容） and practice what we have to work on our own when we do our homework at home and not depend on teachers and classmates for help．（锻炼自己做作业的能力）It can help us learn to keep a balance between hobbies and schoolwork．（帮助学会保持学业和爱好的平衡）【高分句型】
However，there are also disadvantages to do too much homework．Firstly，too much homework needs a lot of time and energy，（太多的作用需要太多的时间和精力）so we students have no time for our favorite hobbies and activities．（没时间去做自己喜欢的和运动）What's more，many students complain that homework is boring because they have to do the same things again and again．【高分句型】．what's worse，it may lead some students to give up studying（抱怨在做同一件事情，甚至厌学）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，是谈论利与弊类的作文，此类作文一般都是四段式：总述-利-弊-个人观点，一目了然，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，只需用两段式，说出其利与弊即可．动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语6的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．