Question

5．假如你是Tom，上周日下午和朋友在小区（neighborhood）空地踢球，请根据图片提示写一篇90词左右的日记．
要求：（1）根据前三幅图片所描述的情景，发挥想象，写出事情的结局；
（2）内容合乎情理，故事完整；
（3）文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
（4）文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数．

Wednesday，June 12，Sunny
Last Sunday afternoon，some of my best friends and I went to play football in the open ground inside our neighborhood．We really had a good time!Suddenly I kicked the ball so hard that it flew at a window．It was broken!An angry woman looked out of a window，shouting at us．We were all too frightened!She asked who did that．I went up and said sorry to her．The woman told us not to play football around next time．A bad day!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据图画写一篇日记，注意日记的格式，时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一，三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．描述图画；我和一些朋友在小区空地踢球，不小心把球提到窗户上，窗户碎了，老人问是谁做的…
2．结局；
 
常用到的重点短语：
have a good time 玩的开心
look out of…往外看
shout at sb 对某人大喊
tell sb not to do sth 让某人不要做某事
【高分句型】
1．Suddenly I kicked the ball so hard that it flew at a window．
so…that，表示如此…以至于，that引导的结果状语从句．
2．She asked who did that．
who作为引导词的宾语从句，作为said的宾语．
3．The woman told us not to play football around next time．
tell sb not to do sth 让某人不要做某事

解答 Wednesday，June 12，Sunny
     Last Sunday afternoon，some of my best friends and I went to play football in the open ground inside our neighborhood．We really had a good time!Suddenly I kicked the ball so hard that it flew at a window．【高分句型】It was broken!An angry woman looked out of a window，shouting at us．We were all too frightened!She asked who did that．【高分句型】（描述图画）I went up and said sorry to her．The woman told us not to play football around next time．【高分句型】（写出结局）A bad day!

点评 这是一篇图画作文，本题材料是四幅图画．结合图画写一篇日子，注意日记的格式，动笔前应认真看图，了解图画内容，展开合理想象．然后根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题．写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误．