Question

绿色的环境能够使我们健康、愉悦，成为环保达人已经是一种时尚。同学们，你们想成为环保达人吗？那我们应该怎么做呢？请以To Be a Greener Person为题写一篇短文。
词数：80左右。
温馨提示：1．短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点、所在学校名称。
2．这些词汇也许对你有帮助：
save,  turn off,  less shopping,  walk,  bike,  cloth bag,  plant
                         
                                                                                    
                                                                                    

Answer 1

To Be a Greener Person
As we all know, good environment can make us healthy and feel happy. Being a Greener Person is a very popular thing. Do you want to be a greener person? I do. But how can we become a greener person? I think we must do something. For example, we should save water. When we brush our teeth, we should turn off water. We also should save electricity. When we leave a room, we must turn off the lights. We must walk to school or ride a bike instead of taking a car. What’s more, we should plant more trees, because it is good for our environment.

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以如何做一名环保达人来写一篇文章。这个题目是开放性的，在题目中并没有给我们提供信息，这需要我们自己考虑，发挥想象力。写作时，我们可以结合日常生活以及教材中有关环保话题的短语和句型发表自己的看法。如节约用水、用电、多种树、交通工具要环保等等。题目中给我们提供的这些词和短语是非常有用的，写作时可以把他们用上。同时注意表达的准确性以及语句的连贯和流畅。本篇短文应主要使用一般现在时，第一人称。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的短文，在这篇短文中，作者结合自己的实际生活，利用自己所学过的关于环保的知识，将如何成为一名环保达人表达了出来。文章时态、人称运用合理得当，符合题目的要求。在短文中作者给了我们一些环保的建议，如save water and electricity、ride a bike to school、plant more trees等，这些建议都是非常合理的，符合题意的。表达时运用句式正确，连贯。如I think we must do something、When we leave a room, we must turn off the lights.、We must walk to school or ride a bike instead of taking a car.、What’s more, we should plant more trees, because it is good for our environment。