Question

书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

根据下面的表格内容写一篇短文。80词左右。注意表达准确，语句通顺。

Inventions	When	Who	Be used for
camera	1839	a French painter	taking photos
bicycle	1880s	people in England	traveling
potato chips	1853	George Crum	eating
tea	Over three thousand years ago	the Chinese emperor, Shen Nong	drinking

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Answer 1

There are all kinds of inventions in our life. But do you know when these things were invented and who invented them? It is said that the camera was invented by a French painter in 1839. It was used for taking photos. The bicycle was invented by people in England. It was invented in the 1880s and was used for traveling. The potato chips were invented by George Crum in 1853. Of course, it was used for eating. Tea was invented over three thousand years ago. It was invented by the Chinese emperor, Shen Nong by accident. It was used for drinking. I think they are very useful.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以_Inventions_为题写一篇作文。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的主要内容，它包括：相机、自行车、土豆条、茶的发明时间、发明人以及用途等。主要内容虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者按照题目要求，讲述了几种发明的时间等，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如But do you know when these things were invented and who invented them?等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如It is said that the camera was invented by a French painter in 1839.等。

考点：话题类作文。