Question

以“我最喜欢看的电视节目”为题写一篇作文，字数70---80。
提示：1、我最喜欢看的电视节目是”动物世界”(The World of the Animals)。
2、通过看这节目，我能看到许多可爱的动物以及其他一些正面临的危险，并领略世界各地的风光。
3、但成千上万的生物正在消失，包括各种动物，并且解释了这些动物被杀死是因为人们要得到它们的毛皮和骨头。
4、我们应保护动物。
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           

Answer 1

"Animal World" is a popular TV program by CCTV. It is also my favourite program. I like it because I really like small animals. Also, the host has the ability to make the program lively and interesting. Finally, from the program I have learned a lot about how animals live, which I didn’t know before.
After I see this program, I know that many cute animals are in great danger, There are thousands of animals are disappearing, including all kinds of animals, people kill them for their furry and bone. I think we should protect the animals,only in this way can we protect our earth

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: . I like it because I really like small animals. Also,the host has the ability to make the program lively and interesting from the program I have learned a lot about how animals live, which Ididn't know before.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理. I think we should protect the animals ,Only in this way can we protect our earth 最后一句点名了文章的主旨我们要保护动物。