Question

作为一名中学生，我们应该在学习和生活中学会帮助别人，关心他人……请你以 “Helping Others”为题，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文谈谈你的想法和具体做法。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

? Helping Others

???? All of us know everyone needs help and everyone can help others.

???? For example, it's our duty to clean up the classroom. We can help our classmates keep the classroom clean.

???? Our English teacher often tells us: helping others is helping ourselves! You help others today. Maybe you will get a great help from others. But I think to give is better than to receive. I like to help the people who are in trouble. His or her smile is enough.

???? To make the world more beautiful, let's help each other.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，题目只给出了主要写作内容，故动笔前先要认真阅读题目，确定写作要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一二人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:for example例如；clean up打扫干净；each other相互等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点：考查提纲类作文。