分析 A篇为应用文写作,要求写一张病假条.首先要注意病假条的格式;其次注意审题,要求写明请假的原因,向谁请假及请假的天数;还要注意署名是李明.人称为第一人称,时态为一般过去时和一般现在时的结合.行文中要注意语言要简洁明了,不要拖泥带水,把事情讲清楚即可.
B篇是一篇话题作文.本文所给内容比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些所给的点表达出来.动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥.根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态;由于是给别人提出建议,给出自己的观点,所以人称主要为第二人称you.注意说话的语气及主谓一致问题.写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.
解答 参考范文:
Sick Leave
Dear Miss Gao,
I'm very sorry to tell you that I'm not feeling well today.This morning I went to see a doctor and he told me that I had caught a bad cold.He also advised me to stay in bed for two days.So I can't go to school today and tomorrow.So I have to ask you for two days off.Forgive me and do give me permission.
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Ming
How to Keep Healthy
Health is very important for everybody.Then how can we do to keep healthy?You can try the following tips:
First,you should have healthy life and eating habits.You shouldn't stay up.You should eat more vegetables and fruit.Don't eat junk food.You'd better have meals regularly.Don't drink coffee too much,it's bad for you.
Second,you can play sports.Sports can make you stronger and healthier.You can play baketball with your friends when you are free.You can go to the mouuntains with your family.
Third,Be happy.A happy man lives longer than a sad man.So sing a song or watch a fun movie.You can do anything to mak e you happy.
At last,stay away from smoking and drinking.Smoking and drinking are too bad for men.They can cause terrible illness.
If you do these things,I believe you can be a healthy man.
点评 A篇为应用文体作文.要求学生一定要注意格式不要写错.另外注意审题,要明确其要求,并要注意行文的简洁与流畅.注意应用文体在语言风格上与其它文体的不同.
B篇为话题作文.在写作中要注意层次紧凑,开始有总说,最后一段总结,中间分要点分别说明题中给出的要点.用first,second,third,at last显得层次鲜明,逻辑性很强.因为文章是提出建议,所以我们要用许多委婉的表达来给别人提出建议,如should,You'd better等.注意不要出现语法,词汇等的错误,不要出现汉语式的英语.
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