Question

【题目】提示：1享誉国内外的著名作家；

2,1881年9月25日出生于浙江绍兴. 1936年死于疾病

3,小时候家境贫寒,但他刻苦学习.最初打算当医生,后来决定写作.

4,著有许多小说,有些可以在中学或大学课本中见到.

参考词汇:在国内外at home and abroad 出生 be born 救治 cure 小说 novel

Dear Ben ,

I am very glad to receive your email

Lu Xun was a very great writer. Hope you can learn much from his novel

Yours,

Li Dan

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ben:

I am very glad to receive your email.I am writing to tell you something about Lu Xun.He was a famous writer at home and abroad.He was born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang on September 25th,1881.He died of his illness.When he was young,he has a very poor family.But he studied hard.At first, he wanted to be a doctor and save people’s lives. So he learned medicine, but later he began to write articles to wake the people up. He wrote many novels in his life,some of which are found in the middle school and college textbooks. It's very beneficial to read Lu Xun's works.

Lu Xun was a very great writer. Hope you can learn much from his novels.

Yours,

Li Dan

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