Question

15．目前，中学生学习压力大，学习任务重，学生的身体素质越来越差．针对这一现象，你校开展了丰富多惨的课外活动．请根据以下提示没写一篇英语短文．
1 你认为开展课外活动有哪些好处？
2 你校课外活动有哪些形式？
3 对你校开展课外活动提出1至2条建议．
注意：1 词数：80词左右．（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2 文中不得提及具体人名，校名及地名．
Out-of-class activities are very important to us teenagers．
Doing out-of-class activities every day helps us keep healthy and makes us relaxed from the stress．At the same time，through those activities，we can learn many things that we can't get from books．

In our school，there are many kinds of out-ofclass activities that we can do．We can play ball games to build a strong body．Playing chess with others makes us wiser and learn to do things step by step．Besides，going to the singing or dancing party helps us relax a lot．

Now we students have too much homework to do after school．I hope our teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in those activities．I also hope our school can organize more out-of-class activities for us．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈丰富的课外活动．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1 你认为开展课外活动有哪些好处？
2 你校课外活动有哪些形式？
3 对你校开展课外活动提出1至2条建议
常用到的重点短语：
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
make sb+adj 让某人怎么样
step by step 一步步
take part in 参加
【高分句型】
1．At the same time，①through those activities，we can learn many things ②that we can't get from books．
①through 介词，通过，做状语
②that是关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词things．
2．①Besides，②going to the singing or dancing party ③helps us relax a lot．
①besides 另外
②动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数helps．
③help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
3．I hope①our teachers will leave us less homework ②so that we can have more time ③to take part in those activities．
①省略了that的宾语从句，作为hope的宾语．
②so that引导的目的状语从句．
③动词不定式做目的状语．

解答 Out-of-class activities are very important to us teenagers．Doing out-of-class activities every day helps us keep healthy and makes us relaxed from the stress．At the same time，through those activities，we can learn many things that we can't get from books．【高分句型】（开展课外活动有哪些好处）In our school，there are many kinds of out-of class activities that we can do．We can play ball games to build a strong body．Playing chess with others makes us wiser and learn to do things step by step．Besides，going to the singing or dancing party helps us relax a lot．（课外活动有哪些形式）【高分句型】Now we students have too much homework to do after school．I hope our teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in those activities．【高分句型】I also hope our school can organize more out-of-class activities for us．（建议）

点评 此题是命题式作文，要求根据提示及所给材料谈谈丰富的课外活动，主要考查写作能力，也是对英语综合知识运用的考查，这就要求仔细分析所给提示，不要漏掉提示要点，可适当发挥，写出语言流畅，意思连贯的文章．
这篇文章语言连贯，简洁明了．在文章中使用不少复合句和固定短语，为文章增色不少，同时也体现出作者的写作功底