Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more informations about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford

University , I’d like to know that you have any special price for us student. As for the money

you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listing? What about lunch?

Is it included? But do I need to bring along own food? How long will the tour last? I’d like

to know the time to return back because I need to prepare my lessons for the next day. Beside,

is there some time with shopping? I really wanted to have a look at the big stores in London.

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more informations about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford

information

University , I’d like to know that you have any special price for us student. As for the money

if/whether students

you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the place listing? What about lunch?

listed

Is it included? But do I need to bring along ∧own food? How long will the tour last? I’d like

Or my

to know the time to return because I need to prepare my lessons for the next day. Beside,

Besides

is there any time with shopping? I really wanted to have a look at the big stores in London.

for want

Yours,

Li Hua

informations--information； that ---if/whether ； student--students ；listing---listed； But---Or； 加my； 删去back ； Beside—Besides； with—for； wanted—want；

【解析】

1. 第一句informations—information 考查名词。information是不可数名词，故将informations 改为information。

2. 第二句 that-- if/whether 考查宾语从句连接词的用法。would like to know“想知道”，句意是想知道是否给学生按特价，故将that改为if/whether。

3. 第二句student--students考查名词的数。此处的us决定了学生应该是复数students，故将student改为students。

4．第三句listing---listed 考查非谓语的用法。此处的list和places之间是被动关系，应该用过去分词作

后置定语，故将listing改为listed。

5. 第六句But---Or 考查连词。此处应是和前面的句子构成选择关系，故将But 改为Or。

6. 第六句 在own之前加my 考查物主代词的用法。own“自己的”，它的前面应该用形容词性的物主代词，

故将my添加在own之前。

7. 第八句删去back 考查副词的用法。副词back不能和return连用，故将back删掉。

8. 第九句Beside—Besides考查副词。Besides“而且”，Beside“在旁边”，故将Beside改为Besides。

9. 第九句 with---for 考查介词的用法。做某事的时间“time for sth ”,故将with改为for。

10. 第十句 wanted-want考查一般现在时。本文是作者写的一封书信，通篇都用的是一般现在时态，故将

wanted改为want。