Question

【题目】（十三）

去年除夕到正月十五期间，北京雾霾天气出现的天数占到50%以上，严重影响了老百姓的生活和健康。请写一篇短文报道此事。内容包括：

1.描述一下北京雾霾的情况；

2.分析雾霾出现的原因；

3.提出治理雾霾的措施。

注意：词数不少于120词。

During the 15 days from New Year’s Eve to Lantern Festival.

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Answer 1

【答案】

During the 15 days from New Year’s Eve to Lantern Festival, Beijing was affected by smog for more than half a month, because of which people suffered a lot. On the road people drove slowly because they could not see clearly. People also suffered from many illnesses caused by smog.

The smog in Beijing has been caused by many factors, in which the increase of cars in the city area plays an important role. The cars send off a lot of poisonous gases, which in turn adds to the already serious air pollution.

In my opinion, the number of cars should be limited. We should call on the people to use more public transport. Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于半开放性的书面表达，主要介绍北京的雾霾天气。要点：去年除夕到正月十五期间，北京雾霾天气出现的天数占到50%以上，严重影响了老百姓的生活和健康。1.描述一下北京雾霾的情况；2.分析雾霾出现的原因；

3.提出治理雾霾的措施。在分析原因时，可以从机动车排放等方面展开；治理措施可以从减少机动车排放，提高人们的绿色环保理念方面的教育等。写作时要注意时态，描述北京雾霾的情况可以使用过去时，后面使用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】范文里高级句式的运用很好，如The smog in Beijing has been caused by many factors, in which the increase of cars in the city area plays an important role.中的非限制性定语从句。以及文章最后一句的部分倒装句Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days.