Question

【题目】 短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As I was leaving the grocery store this afternoon, I saw a poor family — a mother and her four kid sitting in the cold, it brought back my childhood memories. The little girl, about 13, told me he liked my sweater. I said, ＂Thank you.＂ When I am walking to my car, I started to feel sadly. Put the groceries in my car, I suddenly thought a little girl might need a sweater at school. So I went back find the little girl, took my sweater on and gave it to her. I knew she would get a better use of it than me.

Answer 1

【答案】

As I was leaving the grocery store this afternoon, I saw a poor family — a mother and her four sitting in the cold, brought back my childhood memories. The little girl, about 13, told me liked my sweater. I said, ＂Thank you.＂ When I walking to my car, I started to feel . the groceries in my car, I suddenly thought little girl might need a sweater at school. So I went back find the little girl, took my sweater and gave it to her. I knew she would get better use of it than me.

【解析】

第一处：kid→kids 考查名词单复数。名词kid前面有数词four修饰，说明应该使用复数形式，而kid＂孩子＂是一个可数名词，所以使用复数形式kids。

第二处：it→which或在it前加and 考查句子结构。在英语中，要使用连词连接两个句子。本句中我们可以在it前面加and，构成并列句；也可以把it改为which，构成一个定语从句。

第三处：he→she 考查代词。本句中she指代前一句中的the little girl，而he指代的是男性。

第四处：am→was 考查时态。由第一句可知本文叙述的是过去发生的事，要使用一般过去时，所以本句中要使用过去式was。

第五处：sadly→sad 考查形容词。在英语中通常使用形容词与系动词连用构成系表结构，形容词作表语。而副词通常在句中作状语，不能和系动词连用。本句中系动词feel与形容词sad连用，构成系表结构。

第六处：Put→Putting 考查分词作状语用法。动词put与主句主语I构成主动关系，所以要使用现在分词putting...在句中作伴随状语，单个的动词原形是不能作状语的。

第七处：a→the 考查冠词。此处是特指前面说过的女孩，应用定冠词。

第八处：find前加to 考查非谓语。此处表示目的，应用不定式作目的状语，故在find前加to。

第九处：on→off 考查介词。句意：所以我回去找到那个小女孩，脱下我的毛衣并把毛衣给了她。take on穿上，take off 脱下。

第十处：删除a 考查冠词。get good use of 好好利用，比较级是get better use of，a多余，故删除。