Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Recently, people were moved by a story taking the place in Thailand. It told about a girl whom had a quarrel with her mother and ran away from home. After several days, the girl walked into a restaurant in hungers. A man who was the cook invites her to sit down and then made some delicious food for him. The girl was very surprising. Then the cook told the girl that a woman took a photo and asked him whether he seen the girl. But the woman gave him some money to cook for the girl if she turned up. Until then the girl realized how greatly her mother was and she should be grateful on her.

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, people were moved by a story taking place in Thailand. It told about a girl had a quarrel with her mother and ran away from home. After several days, the girl walked into a restaurant in . A man who was the cook her to sit down and then made some delicious food for . The girl was very . Then the cook said that a woman took a photo and asked him whether he seen the girl. the woman gave him some money to cook for the girl if she turned up. Until then the girl realized how her mother was and she should be grateful her.

【解析】

第一处：句意：最近，人们被发生于泰国的一个事件所感动了。a story后面跟现在分词短语作定语。take place是固定搭配，指“发生”的意思。故去掉taking后面的the。

第二处：此处运用了定语从句，先行词是a girl，引导词在定语从句中作主语。故whom改为who。

第三处：in hunger是固定搭配，是“饥饿”的意思，在此作状语，修饰谓语动词walked。故hungers改为hunger。

第四处：文章讲述过去的事情，所以用一般过去时态。故invites改为invited。

第五处：此处指的是“为那个女孩做了好吃的”。故him改为her。

第六处：句意：那个女孩感到很惊讶。指人的内心感觉，应该用-ed结尾的形容词。故surprising改为surprised。

第七处：whether引导的从句中的谓语动词发生于took和asked之前，所以用过去完成时态。故seen前加had。

第八处：前后两句是句意的顺承，而非转折。故But改为And。

第九处：句意：直到那时，女孩才意识到她的母亲是多么伟大，她应该感激她。her mother was后面跟形容词作表语。故greatly改为great。

第十处：be grateful to sb.是固定搭配，指“感激某人”。故on改为to。