Question

【题目】书面表达.

“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。

要求如下：

1.简述你对这句名言的理解；

2.用一个具体事例加以说明；

3.给出恰当的结尾。

注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：

2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。

Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible student version

Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

【解析】

试题分析：本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目判断作文主要介绍要将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能走题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章使用第一人称和一般现在时，一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。