Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出改加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Xiao Ming,

I am delighting to learn that you are going to visit to me during the week-long vacation. Both my parent will also be very happy to see you, but I’m sure you will enjoy every minute here.

I know you are fond of swimming. We can go swimming in the river, that lies not far away from my home. I think this will be very pleasant to swim in such hot summer days. In every gig room of my home there is air-conditioner. You can watch TV, play CDs or read books very comfortable at home. About two miles away from my home stood a mountain which is really worth toured. When we climb to the top of the mountain, we can have a wonderful view of the whole village.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Xiao Ming,

I am to learn that you are going to visittome during the week-long vacation. Both my will also be very happy to see you, I’m sure you will enjoy every minute here.

I know you are fond of swimming. We can go swimming in the river, lies not far away

from my home. I think will be very pleasant to swim in such hot summer days. In every gig

room of my home there is air-conditioner. You can watch TV, play CDs or read books very at home. About two miles away from my home a mountain which is really worth. When we climb to the top of the mountain, we can have a wonderful view of the whole village.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【语篇解读】本文是一封信。在信中，李华向小明介绍了在即将到来的一周假期，他们在他家可以做的事情。

【1】delighting改为delighted。考查形容词。作表语说明主语I的情况，表示“感到高兴的”，故用delighted。

【2】去掉visit 后的to。考查动词。动词visit是及物动词，可直接加宾语，故去掉to。

【3】parent改为parents。考查名词。parent由both修饰，故用复数形式，将parent改为parents。

【4】but改为and/so。考查连词。前后两句在意思上是顺承关系或因果关系，故用and或so。

【5】that改为which。考查定语从句。非限制性定语从句中，指代先行词the river在从句中作主语，故用which，that不能引导非限制性定语从句。

【6】think后的this改为it。考查代词。该主谓结构真正的主语是to swim in such hot summer days，故主语的位置应用形式主语it。

【7】there is后加an。考查冠词。air-conditioner是单数可数名词，表泛指其前应加不定冠词，且第一个音素是元音音素，故用an。

【8】comfortable改为comfortably。考查副词。修饰动词read应用副词，故用comfortably。

【9】stood改为stands。考查主谓一致。本文叙述一般情况，应用一般现在时；该句主语是单数名词a mountain，故用stands。

【10】toured改为touring。考查非谓语动词。be worth doing是固定结构，表“值得……”，故用touring。