Question

【题目】【2015·重庆】

写作一（满分15分）

请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。

If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?

要求：

（1）作出回答并说出理由；

（2）词数不少于60；

（3）在答题卡上做答。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于考查开放性作文写作，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，使用了多种句式和结构。比如I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals.宾语从句；Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward.这个句子还运用到非谓语动词；If only I could go back and reset my goals.还运用到虚拟语气。