Question

【题目】Correction 2(2017届河北唐山一中高三调研)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Which is known to all, nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life. In it, we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get so much information as possible. We are often send e-mails to our classmates. We can make telephone call to our families as well as our friends. However, we can go to school on the net, read different kinds of books and even teach myself English. We can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer games on the net. We could do shopping even without leaving our homes.

Answer 1

【答案】

is known to all, nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life. it, we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get much information as possible. We often send e-mails to our classmates. We can make telephone to our families as well as our friends. , we can go to school on the net, read different kinds of books and even teach English. We can also enjoy music, sports and play computer games on the net. We do shopping even without leaving our homes.

【解析】

第一处：as引导非限制性定语从句，指代后面主句内容，which引导非限制性定语从句的时候，不能放在句首。故Which改为As。

第二处：play a/an…part in意为＂起着……的作用＂，more是辅音音素开头的单词，用a。故playing后加a。

第三处：it指the Internet，on the Internet是在网络上。故In改为On。

第四处：as much information as possible意为＂尽可能多的信息＂，so…as用于否定句。故so改为as。

第五处：we和send是主动关系，不需要被动。故去掉are。

第六处：telephone call是可数名词，这里没有不定冠词，应该是复数。故call改为calls。

第七处：这里是进一步说明网络的好处，用Besides或Moreover表示递进。故However改为Besides或Moreover。

第八处：teach oneself是＂自学＂，主语是we，反身代词是ourselves。故myself改为ourselves。

第九处：和enjoy music，play computer games并列用动词原形。故watching改为watch。

第十处：这篇文章主要使用一般现在时。故could改为can。