Question

【题目】【2015·北京】

假如你是红星中学学生李华。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中，面向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。并以”A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊”英语角“写一篇英文稿件。

注意：词数不少于60.

提示词：一个面团a piece of dough 面人dough figurine

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Answer 1

【答案】

Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines.

When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently.

Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.

We hope we can have more activities of this kind!

【解析】

试题分析：本文依然用四幅图的形式展现了一个活动的过程，与往年一样，体裁为记叙文。与往年不同的是，命题并未给出作文开头，需学生自己写一个事件的概括及总体感受作为文章的第一段。

【亮点说明】

范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。

全文适用的是一般过去时，注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。

范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：非谓语动词Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.；定语从句we put the figurines we made on the table…；时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. 语法知识使用得当，叙事清晰。