Question

【题目】下面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因, 请根据你对图表和漫画的理解, 用英语写一篇短文。写作要点：

1.描述野生动物种类的变化趋势；

2.分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因；

3.谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。

注意：1. 可参照图表、漫画及下面文章开头所给的提示进行必要的发挥；

2.词数100左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

Many animals are in danger of dying out.

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Answer 1

【答案】Many animals are in danger of dying out. As is clearly shown in the chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past three decades. As a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2015.

There are several reasons for this problem. Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters, illegal killing is an important reason. Human beings hunt wild animals for big profits, which has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of wild animals.

In my opinion, it is high time that we should take action to protect them and give wild animals a good living environment. In addition, the government should pass more laws to forbid killing wild animals. Only in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.

【解析】

这是一篇图表作文。本篇要求考生根据图表和漫画反应的内容讲述野生动物种类的变化情况和原因。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，下面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因, 请根据你对图表和漫画的理解, 用英语写一篇短文。写作要点：

1.描述野生动物种类的变化趋势；

2.分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因；

3.谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。

第二，人称为第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，描述野生动物种类的变化趋势。第二段，分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因。第三段，谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: in danger of ，Apart from，resulted in，take action to do sth，live in harmony with.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which 引导的非限制性定语从句 Human beings hunt wild animals for big profits, which has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of wild animals. 虚拟语气In my opinion, it is high time that we should take action to protect them and give wild animals a good living environment.完全倒装句 Only in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: As a result，In my opinion，In addition.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。