Question

【题目】（七）

你校文学社向高三学生征文，请你以“How to Realize my Dream to University”为主题写一篇短文。

内容包括：

1. 理想的大学和专业；

2. 目前的做法；

3. 未来的打算。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to Realize my Dream to University

I often imagine what university I will enter next year. To be honest, I do hope I can go to Beijing University to learn economics which I’ve dreamed of since I was a child.

As a matter of fact, I haven’t completely put into my heart into all subjects such as maths, physics. I often want to play games and don’t listen to my teachers carefully in class.

As a saying goes “No pains , no gains.” I do know if I really want to realize my dream to the university, I have to work hard at all subjects. From now on, I am determined to make full use of my time, attending my class attentively, reading wildly, completing all the homework and doing sports to keep healthy. I believe, only by working hard at all subjects can I make my dream come true.

【解析】

试题分析：对于谈理想的文章，注意理想要积极向上，贴合实际，可以用To be honest，As a matter of fact，From now on等插入语增加文章的真实性和理想的可行性。注意文中所给的信息，不可遗漏，可以多进行一些补充，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】I often imagine what university I will enter next year. what引导宾语从句；which I’ve dreamed of since I was a child. which引导定语从句；“No pains , no gains.”运用谚语；I do know if I really want to realize my dream to the university, if引导宾语从句；only by working hard at all subjects can I make my dream come true. only引导的倒装句等提高文章档次；To be honest，As a matter of fact，From now on，I do hope，I have to，I am determined to，I believe等 表达自己的决心。As a saying goes作为开头，是文章更有水平。归纳的短语：To be honest，dreamed of，As a matter of fact，put into，such as，listen to，As a saying goes “No pains , no gains.”， From now on，be determined to，keep healthy，make one’s dream come true